Let me

by Steven Croat   Sep 10, 2012


Everywhere I turn
two eyes look at me...
I just slowly burn
in trouble. I can´t see
who is it, where is it...
Where is the way?
Let me cheat!
Let me walk away!

(This is my first English poem)
2010.

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  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    For a first english poem of yours it's great

    liked it keep up chum ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Loved it !

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Short one but sweet.
    i enjoyed reading it!
    keep writing!
    *_*

    • 11 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you for reading and commenting!:)

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    This is sooo cute dude! :) but it kinda needs a little help here and there lol

    • 11 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you! :)
      If youfound some mistake please write them!

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