Rainbow Spirits (Formed Mix)

by Maple Tree   Nov 11, 2012

I drink coffee, slow
savoring positive words
my cup overflows.

Ours is
River of happiness.

Sonia hears the songs,
winter plays her melody
she's the wind of peace.

Tony uplifts our sad souls,
Tara Kay scribes emotion,
Edward translates our dark fears,
all three give me hope.

The people above, written in a mixture of tears
I shed, are the reason I believe in the beauty of poetry~


1st stansa= Senryu
2nd stanza= Acrostic
3rd stanza= Haiku
4th stanza= Doditsu

Dedicated to a few of my club members who give me hope and inspiration... Wild Flower, Sonia, Tony, Tara Kay and Edward~


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  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    See , how you make everyone smile and happy:)

    You're amazing:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Wafaa

    Gosh andrea you're the reason I became even more in love with poetry!! I LOVE YOUUUU! <3
    this made me tear up simply because i'm happy to be a friend of someone like you.. someone so special and was sent here to bring joy to people's hearts..

    you're amazing. thank you so much! hugs youuuuu xoxo

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    Amazing!!!!!! Firstly the form mix is creative and new... I liked it:) Secondly, every person you mentioned acted as an element or an ingredient to make this piece outstanding....
    A beautiful, creative, lovely dedication to your team... They would be happy:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    I love the way you build your vocabulary too andrea...with an ingredients of both metaphor and personification....it may take a day for me to build such a piece...

    keep it up andrea

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Syrup ....**SIGH** this is beautiful and you are a very VERY special person xx