Dag this was very touching, it is sad to think of anyone being alone on Christmas or not being in their place of home, where they should be.
The part about forgiveness is very moving because that takes a lot of courage, it makes me wonder about what you are forgiving her for, although I think i have an idea in mind, and if I am correct, this is not easy to do and is part of the healing process.
This touched me deeply, Dagmar. I love how you show the readers about your definition of home with simple yet beautiful imagery - the smell of pines, bells ringing etc. That part about visiting your mother's grave saddened me, yet it shows your love for her.
Thank you for sharing this.
5 years ago
I like this piece so much Dagmar.
It create a good imagery. It's concise and to the point. Forgiveness takes a long time but it always eases ones heart.