My Night Sky

by Daylight Lucidity   Mar 29, 2013

Another day nears its end
as night dances around the horizon
my trust, my heart, slowly mend
as I gaze upon the moon stars.
I lay upon the ground next to you
I look into your eyes, then up again
had I not been holding your hand,
I swear I could see you amongst them.
Fly away with me, my quiet love,
in a sanctuary within the moon's light
remember, I promise as I hold both gently
my heart, my soul, is amongst their glow
yet I offer them to you silently.
Heed my whispered words, my murmured vow
I shan't ever leave you
for how could I, when you ask me to stay...
I open my arms, a slow gesture
you walk into my embrace
and as you do so,
I send a silent promise
to whatever force shall listen,
to love you truly, to keep you happy,
and give you all that you deserve...
as if I spoke aloud
you look upon the ground and whisper
to the tears I've shed while with you
that you love them and will send them far
and you will follow suit.
My love, I wish nothing more than to see you happy
and I hope I can do as such
I tell you with all of me.
As if the moon pulled me, I place a kiss upon your lips
and am pulled back to reality...
I look beside me once again
and gaze at our twined hands
you keep counting the stars
and quietly talk about their majesty
as I wish nothing but to be with you afar
while I tell you, my quiet love,
that you are what makes up the beauty and majesty
in my night sky...


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  • 5 years ago

    by Mona

    Amazing! Beautifully executed! Marvellous piece of writing! So delicate! I visualised your words in my head! You're very talented at playing with words! (:

  • 5 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Wow ok. This on spoke to my heart because it is beautiful and tender and full of love and emotion. It makes you think though that how magical it is to sit next to your love looking at the majestic of the sky as it is romantic and mysterous like love can be. I love how you love this person and how you keep them close :). Your love poems are beautiful and so full of great imagery. Everyline is full of love and I can tell you put your heart into each one. Please dont change your writing 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, outstanding job, truly splendid!! so much emotion and imagery, OUTSTANDING!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Tenderly written. What a lovely piece you have here!

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways


    this is such a lovely, sweet poem, the love goes deep in this poem. too bad it didnt work out. . but it definitely is a lovely poem , I hope the person at least knows you felt this. Nice work