Climbing on life's stair

by alka mendiratta   Aug 4, 2014


Bliss in prayers
That makes you aware
Nothing to despair

Normal to shed a tear
Never let anyone make you scare
Keep moving in your flair

Climbing on life's stair
At each step take care
Alertness foremost there

Victory in your affairs
A smile that you wear
With lots of gratitude to share

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Bliss in prayers
    That makes you aware
    Nothing to despair

    ^^I like this opening stanza and its true. There is bliss in prayers and the despair we feel at times dissolves with prayers.

    Victory in your affairs
    A smile that you wear
    With lots of gratitude to share

    ^^This ending is filled with a life full of spirit and positiveness. Nicely penned. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Victory in your affairs
    A smile that you wear
    With lots of gratitude to share

    Really loved this stanza...very well written.

    all the best & take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmm

    nice poem, full of strength.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    It has improved! There is still some more room for improvement. Though, the poem reads smoother than before. Nice.

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