Dear Moon, Forgive Me

by Maple Tree   Apr 4, 2016

Every sigh the Moon makes
is another moment I have fallen.

Just a star,
burried under an earthy bed
of springs unforgiving nature.

Within Midnight's fervour
there is depth to my madness,

Thank you Moon for
helping me see the sun....


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  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Your poems especially on nature is stunning and written with such elegance. The moon never really stands alone there is always a few stars not far. The moon shines through the night and the the sun is coming on providing light and warmth. Amazing how nature works.
    Absolutely beautiful. Take care

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, beautiful as always! I too love the line of the moon sighing over your stumbles-the moon illuminates your darkness and helps you see another day. Well done! Brenda

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard


    This is beautiful. You have such a delicate way with words.

    "Every sigh the moon makes is another moment I have fallen"


    I love alliteration with the 'm' sound - so soothing and subtle.

    All the best,

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely little piece.

    I especially like the last lines as moon gives way to the sun for a new day and we should all be happy for that.