Comments : Can't believe I almost missed you

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Cupid's aim cannot always be on target can it? This poem shows that - an arrow off target and hitting a man's brain and not his heart can have the affect of lust on the brain, instead of love in the heart.

    A good write,

    Take care with all those flying arrows, you never know where they might land!

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Your randomness is really beautiful, Ms. Lucero! Haha.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Lucero, random or not this is beautiful and so sad because it's a tale of loving and sending love to the wrong people or place is head instead of heart. All I can say is it's a good job it wasn't his pants lol..

    Love is tough and I'm still trying to figure it out.
    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Random?? No its simply life and your gift of writing! A skill to be admired!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This pretty little love poem is fun and full of flare.. It has a unique placement..

    I really adore this poem..The ending grabs the heart..

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Luce, Luce, Luce I love the way you write....as I always said ,I'm a fan. ..lol.. This is stunning
    here's my 5/5 for this.

    Gel