You are my Academic

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Sep 9, 2016

Add up all the love, care, fidelity and loyalty
Subtract all the hate, grudge, and negativity,

Divides time to all of my house chores
Cast the signs in every corner, inside and outdoors,

Multiply trust, respect, and patience
You are the solution in any of my problems.

You are the brain, helps to function everything,
The lungs, the cause why I'm still breathing,

Ears, which notes all your suggestions
Mouth that sealed in each hard situations

The heart, that's why I know how to love,
Eyes, behold that you are enough.

You, yes you,

You're always my Leonardo Da Vinci,
Your favorite Madonna? That would be me.

A lyrics that rhymed in every melody,
Lines perfectly fit in every poetry.

Mozart, Bach,Pachelbel , or even Beethoven
None of them can compare with you. None of them.

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.



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  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is beautifully and cleverly crafted! I love it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you all for the comments and most especially to the judges. heart filled with happiness right now knowing that many appreciates my works. .. And for that my hands and thought wanna do more crave for more and want to make more. ... Thank you so much guys

    Great day to all of us....


  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    This is an interesting twist on the idea of relating love to education, I don't know why that's so popular but I've seen it quite a bit since joining here. The breaking up of the piece into subject matters is interesting and reminds me of setting up a shared binder in school for all your subjects - so that was a cool use of style. The voice comes out clearly and the authors admiration for this person is powerful. The word choice is interesting and works well here because each section includes vernacular devoted to each specific subject as well as the perspective of the author towards each of these themes. This was a breath of fresh air and very well put together.

  • 1 year ago

    by Bradley Peter


    First off: the title. Wonderfully intriguing. Secondly, I thought the layout was witty and fun. And thirdly, I was very pleased to see such interesting choices in wording. I find so many people re-use the same old words, but here it looks like you've tried to break free from that.



    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every piece you read.

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hello Brad,

      thanks for the comment.
      and yes, if I like what I read, I drop down a comment or suggestion. But if I don't like,I rather not quote the piece. I don't want to hurt someone's feeling.

      Thank you so much for reminding me
      have a bless day. :)


  • 1 year ago

    by Nicolette

    I really like how you've incorporated many aspects within one compact poem, love it!

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