Absolutely, Gel, I am always on hand to help if and when I can but to be honest, Gem, you're a lot better than you think.
1 year ago
Hi there first off I would like to wish you a warm welcome. This is a beautiful piece with great unforced rhyming scheme. I like the personal touch to this it's lovely and many of us should have friends like this but as we grow older those friends become few and far between.
1: A beautiful dedication to your dear friend.
I think this line 'She loves me even I have a smelly feet' should have if between even and I so its reads 'She loves me even IF I have a smelly feet.'
Wooohooo.. Proud sister here...
Hey, Gem Why you let the fish out of the tank... it's supposed to be our secret...lol.. Sir ben will help you improve your writing skill... Right, Sir Ben?
1 year ago
by Ben Pickard
Firstly, may I just say a very warm welcome to the site.
This is a lovely post from you. To be honest, I don't think enough friendship poetry is written on this site and I certainly don't read enough, but this is great and has a charming sprinkling of humour throughout.
Well done and all the best,
*I've just noticed you're Gel's sister - an even warmer welcome!