Hi there first off I would like to wish you a warm welcome. This is a beautiful piece with great unforced rhyming scheme. I like the personal touch to this it's lovely and many of us should have friends like this but as we grow older those friends become few and far between.
1: A beautiful dedication to your dear friend.
I think this line 'She loves me even I have a smelly feet' should have if between even and I so its reads 'She loves me even IF I have a smelly feet.'
Firstly, may I just say a very warm welcome to the site.
This is a lovely post from you. To be honest, I don't think enough friendship poetry is written on this site and I certainly don't read enough, but this is great and has a charming sprinkling of humour throughout.
Well done and all the best,
*I've just noticed you're Gel's sister - an even warmer welcome!