by EVERLUCENT   Oct 30, 2016

When I was young, I've met a gorgeous and innocent girl
A girl who looks so sweet that will make your eyes twirl.
She's my inspiration and my shining star
Hoping that someday she's not that far.

She always cheer me up and telling me you can do it,
She gives me strength and I swear no one can get rid of it.
I never thought that I could find a person like her,
An inspiration who will always be there.

She's my inspiration and my star no matter what,
I hope one day she will never forget about that.


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  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    *In answer to your reply:

    Poetry is a process that take time to learn. The only way to learn is to write and try. Try to copy those styles that you appreciate and before you know it, you'll be writing just as good as anyone else. Sorry, you already are writing really well. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Your poems are not messy, you will also do very well like your sister.

    Oh, yes... Me and your sister have lots of similarities. She even shocked me in the beginning on many uncanny topics. After all we are philosopher.. Ha ha ha ha!!!!...

    Yes! I also write dark poems.

    Have a nice day.

  • 5 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hi! Anime Girl

    Here, seems like you have got a person who has a great talent for inspiring others. This kind of person is really unique. The explanation of this wonderful write is quite cheerful. Nicely done.

    Here is a short welcome poem for you.

    My garden's gate is open
    Walk through the straight path; which is
    decorated with flowers' leaves and aroma
    You will feel me refreshing you
    because I'm autumn breeze.

    • 5 years ago


      Hi there Augustus,

      Thank you so much!

      Nice welcome poem huh. I really appreciate it. ^_^

      I am completely shocked 'coz my poems are really messy and I am not expecting that some people will notice it.

      Anyway, My sister told me that we have similarities...... I mean you know? You're writing dark poems too. Dark FTW. <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy


    A lovely sweet dedication. Having a role model to look up to is important. Someone you can emulate and inspire to be like.

    If we use that drive to be like them it produce wondrous results. Never give up and you will find one day, you are not just like her, you are you, but now with similar qualities.

    Well done,


    • 5 years ago


      Hi there Michael,

      I'm really honored because you noticed my piece. <3

      Thank you so much!

      My sister told me that you're a great poet/writer. Man! Could you tell me what kind of potion did you take for your brain to function properly? Lol.

      I thought writing poem is that simple, write it and done. Voala. And then I figured out that my poems are really messy. Like, it doesnt have a firm foundation.

      BTW I'm Gem, Gel's sister.

  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    1st welcome to the site. ..
    2nd I'm glad you're writing poem now...
    3rd just enjoy reading here. ..and writing as well. .

    goodbye stories
    welcome to poetry

    well done with this

    From your Big sis

    • 5 years ago


      Thank you ate! :)

      Wish I could post some stories here too. Lmao. It's my thing you know?