When I was young, I've met a gorgeous and innocent girl
A girl who looks so sweet that will make your eyes twirl.
She's my inspiration and my shining star
Hoping that someday she's not that far.
She always cheer me up and telling me you can do it,
She gives me strength and I swear no one can get rid of it.
I never thought that I could find a person like her,
An inspiration who will always be there.
She's my inspiration and my star no matter what,
I hope one day she will never forget about that.
Poetry is a process that take time to learn. The only way to learn is to write and try. Try to copy those styles that you appreciate and before you know it, you'll be writing just as good as anyone else. Sorry, you already are writing really well. Well done.