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by Augustus Black Jan 16, 2017
Sadness, depression /
Tears fall silently like floods and do not clear
encroaching dark clouds fill my life with fear.
Agony from heartbreak is too much to take.
Remorse from regret is a painful mistake.
Sorrow has poisoned my mind like a snake.
I stumbled upon a gem. I liked it very much. You have a way with formed poetry! Great write.
by Augustus Black
I love it, the words blend nicely. Good job.
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
I'm glad Em nominated this one. .. I like this acrostic ,words perfectly fit to it's acronym....
Thank you very much.
One word: Nominated.
Also, It's hard to find the words in these forms sometimes and to rhyme them too is even harder, you did both.
Oh, thank you very much, you are very sweet and soft.
Well..yes, it was difficult. Thanks again. Em
by - Mr. Darcy
I like this form. I often write these when I can't find the words. Here you have not only found the words for this acrostic of 'tears', but you've manage to rhyme them too.
"Sorrow has poisoned my mind like a snake."
I liked this line - nice simile.
Well done, good job!
Sir - Thanks a lot for the uplifting comment.
by Ben Pickard