Pit Stops

Jaidy, the work of yours I've had the pleasure of reading is extremely well done and unique that I don't know why more people don't read it but I guess each have their own personal preference again this piece is sombre and resonates completely with me.

I like the title and I'm not sure if it's done intentionally or not but my first thought was ok.. pit stops are usually where a race driver stops when it's in need of something so if it's intented then it's rather clever especially as this in my opinion was the feel for the piece overall.

1/ This is extremely sad because I guess when you need a place to rest your weary head and gain strength (like me) no one seems to be around thus not giving a tosh unless they get something out of it.

2/ Here we have it people trampling all over our very souls without a care for our actual wellbeing because we're already tired and weary and weak why would it matter a few extra layers of burdens being added? And why don't they care because they're free of their own burdens, very selfish indeed.

3/ an hard hitting ending which to me is like a kick in the gut.

Take care
Em

What a sad thing to be, when you always give and give and never receive. It may be tiring, but love always bears all things. Beautiful poem.