by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Aug 16, 2017

The beauty that captured your eyes
A monster is hidden inside,
Can be a trap for an imbecile
Will make you believe the unreal.

Gradually sucking you into the core
This creature wants you whole,
And for the time you're fully aware,

Too late,

because you're jailed on her snare.

© 2017 (Gelyn G. Rodriguez). All Rights Reserved


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  • 6 months ago

    by Hallucinostic

    You're welcome. I love you poems, they're amazing, just like you. :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Hallucinostic

    This is really good. Such a mysterious poem. It's amazing how you can always come up with interesting stuff that makes us wanting more. Good job.

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    Gel glad to see you back you've been missed. Very powerful piece

    Em x

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, how awesome to see one of your writes! Full of interesting thoughts here. Well done! We've missed you!

    • 6 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hey Brenda,
      you don't have any Idea how I missed you guys and this site....thanks for reading my come back piece...


  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard


    Lovely to see you back - genuinely. I love the last line here, by the way. Excellent stuff.

    All the best,


    • 7 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Sir Ben,
      This one is a literary note for my abstract painting... I missed writing ...
      I missed u all guys...thanks I'm still welcome

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