Comments : My Sarah Marie

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is extremely beautiful (the imagery you portray) but is so sad in its nostalgia

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Mark, this is just lovely. It's so sad too. Your visuals are spot on, the story weaves seamlessly. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I love how you weave your spells Mark. Beautiful! x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Dude,

    Kinda picked up on this one a little late as it is here.

    It's a beautiful poem and a fitting tribute to your friend.

    Dips ones head

    Craig

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - I just "stumbled" across this.. and im glad I did.
    Its a beautiful tribute to obviously someone close to you.

    Well done, im glad its nominated.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow! This is sadness expressed in the most captivating way. Such vocabulary, Mark.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful. This is an amazing write I think one of your best and definitley warrants the nomination. Loved the visuals and the emotional journey. Well done. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    A deep and sad poem of a young love which still lives
    in your heart...and everything about this love haunts because
    of the deeply etched memories...

    The repetition of Sarah Marie makes this poem so life like
    its as if you are always calling out her name for everything you
    touch, see and experience it is her...beautifully sad..