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by Blue Smurf Nov 15, 2017
Love, romance /
I’m losing myself in a self-destructive battle,
With blood gushing through my open wounds,
Inflicted by the iron rattle,
Of forbidden fruit consumed.
Penetrating feelings of shame and hate,
An outcry for love and losing faith.
My addiction for the touch of a desired lover,
The result of a life full of loveless smother.
I’m electrocuted by the touch of her soft skin.
As emotions brawls from deep within.
Confusion and desire shivers down my spine,
By my gaze into her hazel brown eyes.
My nights are filled with infinite thoughts,
Lustful yearning an uncontrollable force,
Longing for the touch of her naked lips,
The prickle of her toxic nips.
My head is wondering, my knees feel weak
With a pounding echo of licentious shriek.
An overbearing thirst which only she can tame,
Is suffocating me in this burning flame.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Ooh ... your need for this lady is brilliantly depicted here. Great write! :-)
I really enjoyed reading this piece, not to overbearing with sensuality, but enough to keep this flowing with your passion. So I will nominate this :)
Blue Smurf, Michael said it already. Not overbearing sensuality but very passionate. I love the emotions contained in this and glad that this is nominated.
Great first post and a warm welcome to the site!
by Ben Pickard
A very sensual and well rhymed first post from you, Smurf.
Well done and a warm welcome to the site,
by Blue Smurf
Thank you Ben. I appreciate it.