Priceless

by Lover of Mind23   Dec 27, 2017


As I walked away from you,
My eyes started to swell with tears
My Heart filled with sorrow
Satisfying only a portion of my time
Inspiring me for those few moments we shared together
Wondering if you knew how much it meant to me
No time wasted
No breath exchanged
But little do you know.. you took my breath away
That's why I didn't respond when you complimented me
You saw things in me
I didn't see in myself
Realizing that made you priceless

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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    A heart-felt piece, and as Mel says a great first post
    and welcome too

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A lovely first post from you. You have placed your heart out in this write which impressed something in the reader. Welcome to PnQ!

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just lovely! Welcome to P&Q-

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Welcome to the site and I have to agree with Ben. All the best

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely first post from you.
    A warm welcome to the site and all the best,

    Ben

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