Torn

by Victor   Feb 5, 2018


There's one thing I hate more than anything else
One thing, that tears me up
One thing, that tears other people up
One thing, that I can't stand
It's people, who are suffering
And claiming it's "Not that serious", when it clearly is
I'm forced to watch them slowly kill themselves
And I hate it

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  • 8 months ago

    by Ren

    It pains me to see others like this as well. You capture this emotion perfectly...well done!

  • 8 months ago

    by Michael

    Powerful and raw piece Victor
    put together well.

    Michael

  • 8 months ago

    by Avarna

    You're so precious, I love you, stay safe you angel.????

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