Sun, Moon And Stars

by CJ Maleney   Feb 12, 2018

I'm going to build a world around you,
Already! one has begun.
I shall make you both my moon and stars
And I will be your sun.

If you are moon and I am sun,
Our children are said stars.
Such twinkling things for us to love,
That I see shine from afar.

Though sometimes I am distant,
When the nights are filled with fright.
Rest assured when morning comes
You will always see my light.

I won't be an all consuming inferno,
And I will not burn anything away.
Just a gentle warmth I give to thee
To guide you through each day.

Yes I will be that sun,
But I desire and need my moon.
Pledge to me eternity
And see how my core doth swoon.


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  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oooohhhh...this will indeed make the moon
    intoxicated! I like the soft tone in this poem and the
    flow is smooth with passion set aglow with each
    line...lovely read!

  • 1 year ago

    by Wuggleberry

    It's a lovely poem oozing with real love. Very romantic

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael


    you are writing some good pieces lately fella, glad to see this one on the board.

    Michael :)

    • 1 year ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude

      Think I need some dark and twisty though lol

  • 1 year ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Amazing work :)

    • 1 year ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers Em, not seen you on for a while

      Hope all is good

      Craig x

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Craig, this is so swoon worthy....such a lovely write-

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