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by Errol Mondell Feb 21, 2018
Love, romance /
As I lay here in bed
Thoughts of you goes through my head
You are a magnet that draws me close to you
But yet my heart still feels blue
I wish you were here with me tonight
Why do plans never turn out right
I wanted to call and hear your voice
But my heart beat said "think twice"
Why do I give myself to you so much
When I feel there is no trust
How I waited for my phone to ring
To hear your voice on the other end
Tonight am feeling so sad
I miss you so much it hurts real bad
It's no wonder I cannot sleep
Thoughts of you won't let it be
Since I met you I started feeling strange
I suddenly became a happier man
Now I wonder what is it I feel for you
Could it be am really falling in love with you?
So now I say to you
What is it between me and you
Do you feel the same as I do
Would you let me be a part of you?
I really adore this peice.. It hits home. The way you worded it, how it rhymed so easily.. Made it fun to read & the emotion in this is definitely real. I'm adding to favs. (:
by Errol Mondell
Thank very much, I am happy it connected with you and appreciate your honesty.
by Milly Hayward
What a beautiful piece full of those nervous worries and trepidation of new love. A lovely easy to read piece. Best wishes Milly x
Appreciate your comments, thanks.
by Ben Pickard