by Em (marmite)
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Acrostics aren't easy at the best of times but you made this seem easy meena and it's rhymed, what more can one say?? |
by CRAFTY KEN
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I like it Meena, a lovers prayer. |
by Brenda
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Meena, beautifully sad....hugs you- |
by William Mae
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As you always do, you capture so much depth in such few words. And each word beautiful Meena. |
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I read this at work and it took my breath away! I was not expecting an acrostic, and the brevity somehow made this piece more precious and nostalgic. I think my favorite part was "pregnant moon", as I can only picture the moon as shedding its full light, undisturbed. I used to love to describe nature as "pregnant" and remember writing about the "pregnant sun". |
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This is just lovely, Ms. Meena! Sad but beautiful! |
by Michael
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Meena, |
by gumshuda
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Why is the moon pregnant? |
by Meena Krish
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A full moon |
by gumshuda
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