Dear santa...

by Danielle   Aug 20, 2004

Dear Santa clause,
*Im writing you this hour
To ask you to come here
I really need your help Santa
On this cold snowy year*
*I dont want toys this holiday
No trucks, cars, or planes
No bikes, money, or candy
For nothing is the same*

*Santa, Im asking you for this one thing
That on Christmas day
To make my mommy be here
So that she can laugh and play*
*I dont know how much time
That she has left with me
She says she has to leave soon
To somewhere I cant be*

I went up to her room
She was crying and on her knees
Saying god please take her
And to take care of me
I dont understand Santa
Where is she going to?
No one will tell me anything
Please Santa, I need you

Mommy is never happy
All she does is cry
She puts on this smile though
I know she really tries
She doesnt want me to see
All her pain and sorrow
She doesnt want me to know
That she might not be here tomorrow

Youve always gave me
Whatever I pleased
So this year Santa
just give this one thing to me
Put a beautiful smile
On my mommy's face
I want to see her happy
Before she leaves this place

Please give her everything
That she had wished for this year
I dont care if I dont get a thing
I promise I wont shed a tear

Santa please help me
Please make my life better
Please give my family peace
By answering this letter

P.S. Ive been good this year Santa
That you must know!
So dont give up on me
Please be my hero...

Vote/Comment... Thanks guys!


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  • 10 years ago

    by GothChick

    Terrific work!! You are a really good poet!! *_*

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady C

    Oh...jesus that was good! It made me feel so sad, but in a good way though (as in a good poem, not as in a good situation..ehe)
    What Im trying to say is, this is one of the best poems I've ever read!
    Go you!

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    I love it... i felt it so much... it made me cry... one of the best ive ever read... keep it up


  • 11 years ago

    by ~Patiently Waiting~

    This is awesome, one of the best yet saddest poems I've come across of late. Where'd u get the inspiration? Good write, keep it up, 5/5

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