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by Luvmeluvr Oct 22, 2004
Sadness, depression /
I was only half awake
~"How many pills did you take?"
I was shaking, I felt sick
~"Quick, grab her arm, I'll grab her wrist."
I could barely even see
~"Come on, Jimilee, stay with me!"
I was walking oh so far
~"Hold her up, I'll get the car.
I was moving toward this place
~Wake her up, just slap her face!"
I was moving toward the light
~"Where's the ER? Make a right!"
I was falling fast asleep
~"She's not walking, grab her feet!"
I was falling toward the floor
~"She's not breathing anymore!"
I committed suicide
~"I'm sorry sir, your wife has died."
Poetry from a different angle, experimentation wonderful
Hi this poem is realy good, I love the way its short but harsh and it realy makes you think nice one!!!! xx
Whhoa that's Awesome! Very well written!
by Not Bulletproof
whoa...amazing....that's awesome...creative imaginative...good job <3 xxxx
WOW. This is brilliant. very unique and well written. i have to dissagree with Nefarius, i don't think that line disturbs the flow of the poem at all. tc. xmollyxx