by Unseen Exposure          Nov 20, 2004
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            rekindled love
            
    
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            It's beautiful the way your hand beams from the light in the ceiling | 
by amber
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            Beautifully written :) i loved it.  I could just see the clouds in Heaven and the angels.  I could hear the fluttering of angel wings.  I could hear the tear fall from your cheek.  I could hear it and see it all.  Good imagery.  You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to write :D | 
| I really liked it, good job | 
by Kendra
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            Hey! OK, so thats like my favorite poem ever. It is wikid good, and I love it. I love all your poems, they are so beautiful. great job! | 
by Alissa
| beeeaaauuuttttiiiiffffuuuullllll =) | 
| ilgfhsfohgosi!!! Sorry about that I couldnt seethe keyboard my eyes wasnt in focus yet from the tears I shead. That was so deep i had to read it twice |