Comments : Little girl

  • 13 years ago

    by yinyang22334455

    wow! that wuz really awsome

  • 13 years ago

    by Emily

    wow that was unique and interesting....i really liked it....

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i wanted to write something like this but i saw you beat me too it lol~ but you perfected it, i could of not done n e better~amazing write, created a vivid image as well as emotions running heavy....sad to know it happens everyday though.....:( n e 5* from me! ~keep droppin by and you will defently be a fave on my list, i truly admire your writing....
    Love Heather.

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    great flowed really nicely..very touching...

  • 13 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    wow, thts a great poem, especially bcz it's so typical, i mean it can happen any day, to any poem tho, did you write it from experience? well umm, either way its still good, plzz read some of my poems =)


  • 13 years ago

    by Rebecca Morgan

    WOW, that was really sad...but it was good..Keep writing cause you have a real talent ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    wow very nice! Keep it up!

    Love Always,

  • 13 years ago

    by mistake

    that was fantasic amy babe i could never do anything better i am really touched now i've read it and i think you have alot more talent then i ever could have

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    That took my breath away, it's so sad!!! It almosrt made me cry!!! Amazing!!! 5 for sure...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This one was well writen 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    Who ever put anything less then 5 is a twit and you tell them I said that the whole thing was great it left me thinking and shocked. that is truely what a poem should do teach without having to preach exellent poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by PoeticMystery


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  • 12 years ago

    by jesika

    Loved it. keep it up


  • 12 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    That was just so amazing but so sad. You have an extreme talent for writing. Keep up the great work and keep writing! Luv Nicole =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Pandorra13

    OmfG! thats sad, good but sad

  • 12 years ago

    by fastforward

    Loved it.
    .f.u.c.k.i.n.g. LOVED it.
    yeah something kind of like this happened to my little sister so this poem made me....well...
    anyways. amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    This Poem is REALLY good!!

  • 12 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Such passion; saddened reality. Keep it up! Oh, and on that one Sleeping Beauty poem, it was supposed to begin with A. lol!, thanks for pointing it out!

  • 11 years ago

    by aloneforgotten13

    I don't know why you don't have a 5 on all your work cause its amazing it gives me chills and brushs gentally across my soul