Comments : Wait A Minute...

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    awwww...im all teary eyed now!! Boy do you sound just like my mother and probably every mother in this world...I am not sure what to say because your right..time just flys by! It seems like awhile I ago I was the one who just started school and was learning how to tie my shoes and say the alphabet...Eirisa there is no doubt in my mind that a terrific girl like you can not handle being a parent! When the day comes when your con is all grown up and starts talking back and throwing fits..I know you can take it..You are such a strong girl and one of my biggest role models and I'm sure your son will always love you in regardless!!This was such a wonderful poem and I loved reading it!! If your son was older to understand poems like these I know he would truly love it like the rest of us! Your great dont ever stop writing!
    5/5 as always sis!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thank you for all the comments, aww!! how sweet is this...very good!! ur so talented *5

    love Heather.

  • 12 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    i loved it...

  • 12 years ago

    by Bizarre

    hey that's really good. i gave it a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Omg, gurl I love your new work, its so amazingly awesome but hey it doesnt surprise me coming from you .. lol .. way to go on this one ! 5/5 and also, email me soon girl, we gotta tlk, lol .. k ? lol you know i love ya, ur my big sis, oh yea i almost forgot check out my new poems, cuz u havent checked 'em in awhile .. Thansk agian girl !
    Love Yas,
    Maybeth ~

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristal Sowiecki

    wow ive been wanting to write a poems like this for some time! im due march 24th! little boy! this was a joy to read!

  • 12 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Simply one of the best poems I've ever read...Honest to god..The stucture and how it all goes together..I love it!!!!So inspirational!!!!!Excellent..Don't stop writing...
    (Thanks for the comments and votes they don't go unnoticed!)

    5/5
    Chris

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Oh how beautiful .... there is no love that is as pure, kind, and terrifying as the love of a parent..... Great Job

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, “Wait a Minute” A wonderfully written
    poem so real to life, it put tears in my eyes. I know
    these emotions all to well having been blessed with
    a son, right there with my wife I felt and saw what
    changes she went through. Knowing our baby is a
    boy, we would rub her belly and talk to “Jesse” ever
    night at bedtime. From his birth to now at 21 it’s
    been a flash “And think to myself please could you just wait a minute”
    Glorious Girl! True to life, very heartfelt write. ( :

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    great write

  • 12 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks Kelly alot of my poetry is pretty long you'll find...I am a person of many, not few words...thanks for the feedback :o)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    I loved it eirisa! great job! :) Yes it is long but it's fab!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh I love it!! My nieces and nephews are so precious to me! I am all about the kids!! One say they can't even crawl and seems like the very next they're walking. I can't even believe how fast it's all going by. But he has an incredible Mommy (hunbun830), she is always taking pictures and video taping so we can look back and see all the special things that little munchkin does. Your poem was awesome and that little one is also lucky to have you...5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This was so sweet. I really enjoyed it and I love your style. Great job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This was truly sweet and so sad. It made my heart tremble. A wonderful perspective from a mother. Great job Eirisa!

  • 12 years ago

    by R F

    Awww, very sweeeeet mate, its really sweet, time really flies, i dont know if its a sad or a good thing! what do you think?

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Awesome to say the least! Great poem with great flow!

  • 11 years ago

    by ReBecca

    Very good message. i know just how you feel. i felt the same when my son is born, and still feel the same now and he is 9. though now, it's almost more bittersweet, because he truly is growing up, and i just want to stop time and keep him my little boy forever.

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*JESSiE*~

    Wow this poem is sooooo good, and i can definatly relate!!!!!!! the past 3 years has flown by sooooo fast its really weird, keep up the great work!!!

    xoxoxox
    JESSiE

  • 11 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I dream of the feelings that you describe in the first two stanzas. The last stanza broke my heart, and those are the only feelings I fear about motherhood. Your genuine and true love shows for your son in this piece. Keep it up!

    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy