omg...such a good poem..and thanks by the way for commenting on mine...I really like this one..I cant really relate to it, because I cant say that I have lost trust in a friend before because I havent..and Im glad I havent because I wouldnt want to go throught all that.. Keep up the good work, girl..im here if you need to talk..just email me..
awwww am so sorry i really hate broken friendships....i can relate to this poem .and am sure can many others....trust is key in any relationship and am sure u will find other people who you can trust and be there for you. such a beutiful poem take care.
Your 14 right, well I don't know what to say, I guess you had a bad time with guys. I am sorry. the feeling I got from this says one word to me VICTEM!!
In order to be a better writer you must learn to think outside the box expand your mind and learn about the world. There is more to life then your love life open your eye there are issues you could write about beside love trust me on this expand your mind.
I sit and remember,
Our friendship so tender,
I never thought it could be ruined by anything,
But it ended up just like a summer fling.
that was my favourite stanza and i hope no one did destroy your trust like that and tell everyone your secrets because who ever it was doesnt deserve you as a friend you dont need someone like that but anyway it was a great poem!!!