Comments : Trust

  • 12 years ago

    by Abby

    Good poem. I know exactly what you mean.

  • 12 years ago

    by MYkisstoBETRAY

    5/5* AWW..that is terribly sad, but I loved it. good emotion keep it up!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    read this one good job thank you

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany

    omg...such a good poem..and thanks by the way for commenting on mine...I really like this one..I cant really relate to it, because I cant say that I have lost trust in a friend before because I havent..and Im glad I havent because I wouldnt want to go throught all that.. Keep up the good work, girl..im here if you need to talk..just email me..

  • 12 years ago

    by LuAnnLy18

    This is a great poem. I know exactly how you feel. It's sad to lose a friend, but sometimes you'll find better ones! :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    trust is very important

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I enjoyed it very much

  • 12 years ago

    by Maddie

    I can relate very much to losing trust in a friendship. This poem was well written and the words flowed together nicely. Good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Losing a friendship is awful and you'll know when you find the right one just like i did and i wouldn't change her for the world! Great poem though. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by hussain

    awwww am so sorry i really hate broken friendships....i can relate to this poem .and am sure can many others....trust is key in any relationship and am sure u will find other people who you can trust and be there for you. such a beutiful poem take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very well written and the flow never ceased... the words joined together perfectly like a marriage in heaven .... great job

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    ahh tht's too bad..nad i have first hand experience on this matter...goes to show at the end of thr day the only person whom u can always fall back on is urself...nice write i gave it a 5:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    Your 14 right, well I don't know what to say, I guess you had a bad time with guys. I am sorry. the feeling I got from this says one word to me VICTEM!!
    In order to be a better writer you must learn to think outside the box expand your mind and learn about the world. There is more to life then your love life open your eye there are issues you could write about beside love trust me on this expand your mind.

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I sit and remember,
    Our friendship so tender,
    I never thought it could be ruined by anything,
    But it ended up just like a summer fling.

    that was my favourite stanza and i hope no one did destroy your trust like that and tell everyone your secrets because who ever it was doesnt deserve you as a friend you dont need someone like that but anyway it was a great poem!!!

    Lucy***

  • 12 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    Terrible when friends ditch your ass for something new.
    Or break that bond of trust you share.
    4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! excellent poem. its kinda what im goin thru too.

  • Again, nice poem with a good flow and natural rhyming sceme.
    Well Done !!
    xxx cici xxx

  • Kinda spelt scheme wrong... oh well i've never been good at spelling !!!

    xxx cici xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was ok...but nothing speciall about it...4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by amber

    Wow that is awesome great job