Knowing when it's over

by Josh Sowiecki   Feb 26, 2005

It's when you don't accept my calls and you no longer write
It's when every time we talk it turns into a fight
It's when you said so many things that were a lie
It's when those hurtful deceits would make me cry
It's when I was locked up and you were out doing your dirt
It's when you never cared who you hurt
It's when another gurl is in my dreams
It's when everything I said I no longer mean
It's when I can't believe a word you say
It's when no matter how close you are you seem far away
It's when I need you and you're not there
It's when you don't seem like you even care
It's when the words I say no longer flow
When it's finally over this is how I'll know


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  • 11 years ago

    by Brook

    It's sad but I can relate I really liked it. thanks for reading my poems

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristal Sowiecki

    baby you'll never lose me.

  • 12 years ago

    by BabyGurl

    that was a really good poem keep up the good work !!!

  • 12 years ago

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  • 12 years ago

    by BrittanyMaxine

    I give that a 5, that is how i knew that my b/f and i were over. Thanx for commenting on mine as well i hope that you keep them coming and that your baby girl stays with you for a while!!

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