The End

by AJ   Mar 22, 2005


I watch my friend,
And sense the end,
A killed relationship,
He let it slip past his guard,
And now it’s hard,
He can feel his heart, being ripped
apart,
Inside he tries to hide,
The pain that he gained.

He’s going insane,
He’s just like me, what I used to
be,
And now I see, as he starts to lose
it,
He’s going to use it to get high
And try not to cry.

A sigh let go, lets me know,
That even though he says he’s all
right,
He fights the urge to curse and
disperse,
The anger, the danger stored inside.

He can fides with no one,
And finds that a twisted mind,
Can control you, can slow you down,
Until you are looking around,
On your back, on the ground,
And all he wants, is for this attack,
To send it’s end………

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  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    I thought this was very well written. Although I think as i was reading it i was envisioning it as a song. nice job as a poem, i think it'd be amazing as a song.

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    omg, i love it, ive seen that happen a lot , n i even know wat if feels like... good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great job!! thats very very good! 5/5 definately! I loved it! You did a great job! I love all your poems! your on my fav!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very good poem with such deep emotion. Very well written. Check out some of mine if u would please Thanx and Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    beautiful!!! very deep and strong. ur very talented. im def gonna have to check our more of your work.
    Ariane
    -xXx-