Unidentified Heart

by Carmen   Apr 27, 2005


Some people say,
You can't love someone before meeting them;
Even though we never met,
I feel connected to him.

Some say I know nothing,
About him at least.
Maybe I don't.

But deep down,
Down inside,
I know that I do.
There is nothing left to hide.

I don't know him personally;
I don't know his name,
I don't know his age,
I especially don't know his body's frame.

One thing I do know is,
I love him.
Not that kind of love,
That's broken on a whim.
The kind of love,
Were you two must talk,
Feel each other there,
And take our love on yet another walk.

He probably doesn't love me,
I mean, he hasn't even seen my face!
And if I had disappeared,
I'd be gone, without a trace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Really the same as your other poem. You don't have to make it longer, just fully expand your thinking to the possiblilities. Pretty good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice topic and well-chosen message. But, work on the flow and try adding more imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very well expressed. I hope you find that special someone in your life to help you find your true happiness within your self.

    Best wishes,

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I've felt that way before. hmm
    makes things all nice and dandy

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    The structure was creative, i enjoyed reading it, but i have to say that i found it hard flow through the whole thing. I have to agree with oddyball that the "body's frame" line doesnt really fit. other then that a creative write.

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