A World's Reality

by lisa marie   Apr 29, 2005


The rain is your reality
That's surrounded by validity
The sun is the hospitality
That welcomes rainbow's formality

And when you beautify the demon
By constantly dreaming
You are watching the world deepen
While we're silently screaming

Then the world starts to make sense
And truth makes the difference
Singing out your own defense
Awaiting the worlds suspense

Cause if the angels lost their wings
And we got lost in everything
Heaven would fall and eventually bring,
A little bit of joy and would turn to spring

So hold on to your years
And let go of all your fears
Cause when the rainbow appears
We're covered in sunlight tears

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    excellent. you are very talented
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    your stuff is seriously amazing. I love it... wow

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    Not as good as the last one, but still, good one..

    You chose a very difficult rhyming scheme, and didn't succeed perfectly...Some ofthe rhymes seemed forced, and others again didn't really rhyme, or messed up the flow...But some worked out great...

    This one could use some revising...

    but still...good poem...I like how you put your thoughts into words...you are good at this!

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    WOW im speechless. this poem was REALLY good. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was beautiful! It was written very well and the message was good! Loved it! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

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