by Hayley Marie May 21, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
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Daddy When You Come Home, |
by Marjan
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I love your poems. all your poems rock. I love the way you write them. |
by DANI
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hey hayley guess who this is WCMD!!! i like your poem thought id let ya know c u in skool!!! x.x.x.x.x |
by Amanda
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I do like it - my honest opinion. I think it was written with alot of thought and it is beautifully written. :) |
by katie!
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good, emotioanl poem, well done and keep writing |
by EoB
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This one also lacks a complete rhyming scheme, which destorys the flow... |