Daddy When.... [re-submitted]

by Hayley Marie   May 21, 2005


Daddy When You Come Home,
You’re Always Drunk,
You Fall Asleep On Your Chair,
And I Have To Look After Your Son.

Daddy When You Are Home,
You Don’t Talk To Me,
You Are Too Drunk To Talk,
Why Are You Doing This Daddy?!

Daddy When You Are Sober,
I Don’t See Much Of You,
I Know Mommy Left You Daddy,
But I’m Here For You.

Daddy When We Went,
I Saw The Pain In Your Eyes,
It Hurt Me So Much,
I Felt So Bad Inside!

Daddy When I Went, I Felt Bad,
But You Really Really Hurt Us,
Daddy, I Am Back Now,
But Daddy You Are Still So Anxious!

Daddy, When My Sister Hit Me,
You Said “Give It A Chance Hayley”
I Did Daddy,
But She Was Hit Me So Violently.

Daddy, When She Hit Me,
I Had Scratches Over My Body Daddy,
She Went To Hit Me Again,
But I Stopped Her Daddy!

Daddy, When That Night Came,
I Could Not Take It Anymore,
Mommy Didn’t Know What Was Going On,
As It Was All Behind A Closed Door.

Daddy When I Rang You,
You Asked To Speak To Mom,
She Seemed Puzzled,
Because She Didn’t Know What Was Going On.

Daddy When You Picked Me Up,
I Cried For Ages In The Car,
You Gave Me A Hug Daddy,
And For That You Are A Star!!

Daddy When I Came Home,
Things Were The Same,
I Got In There,
And To The Door, Nanny Came.

Daddy When 3 Weeks Passed,
We Are Back To Square One,
Daddy You’re Drinking Again,
It Is Time To Take Some Action.

Daddy When You Turned To Drink,
Things Changed,
You Cant See It,
But Your Mom And I Have Exchanged
Thoughts.

Daddy When You Fall Asleep,
When You Have Drank Too Much,
Nanny And I Talk,
We Want You To Retouch.

Daddy When You Breath Heavy,
I Think You Are Not Going To Breathe,
Daddy, What Is With The Drinking?
Well At Least You Don’t Seethe!

Daddy, Im Going To Help You,
I’m Going To Do Whatever I Can,
It Is Destroying All Of Us,
But Daddy I Do Have A Plan!!!

*Depression*Is*An*Illness* ©

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  • 13 years ago

    by Marjan

    I love your poems. all your poems rock. I love the way you write them.
    love you so much,
    marjan

  • 13 years ago

    by DANI

    hey hayley guess who this is WCMD!!! i like your poem thought id let ya know c u in skool!!! x.x.x.x.x

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda

    I do like it - my honest opinion. I think it was written with alot of thought and it is beautifully written. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by katie!

    good, emotioanl poem, well done and keep writing

  • 13 years ago

    by EoB

    This one also lacks a complete rhyming scheme, which destorys the flow...

    Most of the stanzas have rhymes, but some doesn't...Either that signifies that you were unable express what you wanted to with rhymes, or that you are very progressive...

    As for the poem, it is filled with emotions, which is very important...

    The message is once again easy to find, and you present it in a nice way...

    good one