All or Nothing

by Johnny Marlin 2   May 27, 2005


I try so hard
To look to the sky
But the ground is so much closer
I feel as though I could die

This isn't the worst thing
That could happen at all
So now I keep trying
To move on and stand tall

But hurt is overwhelming
I struggle for a breath
I'm staring life in the face
But I wish only for death

Will someone come along
And mend this tattered soul
Or is this all life has to offer
Am I slipping down a hole

Please someone save me
From the agony and pain
I have just hit the bottom
I'm waiting to be slain

- I don't really like this one, but I wrote it so I'll post it. I hope you all enjoy.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I really did enjoy this, different...but well written! well done.....luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    hey man that was nice my cousin says so too. never quit writing!!!
    much love 2 u
    p.s read my poems PLZ!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by »*GEORGiE*«

    Great write.. ! *deep*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, I like the ending. Great write. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    jason, there are something different writing than other, unique yet creative with every lines....

    long time no heard you myfriend, where'd you go____? did you receive my mail...?

    you take care myfriend, keep moving your creative of written.....bert.

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