Goodbye Baby

by Corrie   Jun 2, 2005


Your hand found mine, our fingers intertwined.
I never said a word, you could always read my mind.
Our first kiss was a piece of heavenly bliss.
We danced to our song under the stars, swore our love and gave eachother our hearts.

Eventually, you cheated on me, not one, not two, but three times you did this wrong to me. I wont be sticking around to let you hurt me again. I'll always care about you, but only as a friend. You see, I gave you my heart, and you gave me a scar.
I shouldn't have let it get this far.

Everything we shared, is now what we lack.
Because Hunny I'm leaving and I wont be looking back.
I was in love with you,
but the only thing you ever intended to do was, shatter my soul and rip my heart in two.
It's just too bad I let you succeed at what you came to do.
I can't believe I really fell in love with you!

I guess this is it, my last goodbye, but as I go I cant help but wonder why all this happened to me... Oh well, Goodbye Baby...

** please comment, i would love sum advice!! **

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    That was so emotional. I loved it. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    THEY SAY THE THIRD IS A CHARM ONCE A PLAYA ALWAYS A PLAYA RETURNING TO HIS ARMS IS LETTIN HIM HE CAN LEAVE YOU WHENEVA HE PLEASES N HAVE U BACK WHEN EVA HE PLEASES PLEASE DONT FALL FOR HIM IVE BEEN THROUGH THIS BEFORE IS PAINFUL LUST NOT LOVE

  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    Thanx Nici! for all your comments, I appreciate them! and no that was a typo.. lol, but i fixed it! : ) and you had a good point about my other poem, "the man you dreamed up foe me" I changed that too, honestly i've never written before so i dont even know what a stanza is! lol! but thanx again! *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    This poem was filled with emotion and I would imagine was hard to put down in words. Put you have managed it really well!

    One minor point, the line that starts:
    'I never said said a word'
    Is the repition meant to be there? or is it a typo? Either way the repition works well as I feel it represents nervousness.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

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