Comments : How can you love someone

  • 12 years ago

    by Becky drake

    so much emotion, so much talent keep writing, love ya Becky

  • 12 years ago

    by Nici

    I like the use of asking questions within your poetry, it works well.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 12 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    ty very much nici

  • 12 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    I enjoyed this one. Parts of it remind me of my past. :) on to your next ones. :D doing great so far babe!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This was very good too. Hon you got tallent. You know the saying your your worst cridic. I know I am mine. So chin up and keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by abcede

    hey cool poem... for you.. i think you said you wanted help, i'm not sure.. well.. try writing a structured poem.. a rhyming one.. then you will get the flow and then your "free verse" or poems like these will have a larger impact on the reader!! but i really love your creativity!! AWESOME!

    maybe you could check out some of mine!!??

  • 12 years ago

    by greenmunky

    aww that was cute 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another great poem! This one reminds me of my son. I was with his father for 9 years. The love that came from that relationship was my son! Once again a job well done! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    i thought it was a great poem, and i know how u feel when u ask how can u love someone, cuz ive been there 2, great job!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent poem! that was very powerful. I know how you feel. Great job. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    i liked this one. it had good emotion!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    all poems have a flow, but either it's good or it's not...and this one is right in the middle...it's not horribly bad, but it's not absolutely perfect either...but nice idea, good word choice! keep it up!