Comments : How can you love someone

  • 13 years ago

    by Becky drake

    so much emotion, so much talent keep writing, love ya Becky

  • 13 years ago

    by Nici

    I like the use of asking questions within your poetry, it works well.

    Keep Writing

  • 13 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    ty very much nici

  • 13 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    I enjoyed this one. Parts of it remind me of my past. :) on to your next ones. :D doing great so far babe!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This was very good too. Hon you got tallent. You know the saying your your worst cridic. I know I am mine. So chin up and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by abcede

    hey cool poem... for you.. i think you said you wanted help, i'm not sure.. well.. try writing a structured poem.. a rhyming one.. then you will get the flow and then your "free verse" or poems like these will have a larger impact on the reader!! but i really love your creativity!! AWESOME!

    maybe you could check out some of mine!!??

  • 13 years ago

    by greenmunky

    aww that was cute 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another great poem! This one reminds me of my son. I was with his father for 9 years. The love that came from that relationship was my son! Once again a job well done! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Brooke~

  • 13 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    i thought it was a great poem, and i know how u feel when u ask how can u love someone, cuz ive been there 2, great job!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent poem! that was very powerful. I know how you feel. Great job. xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    i liked this one. it had good emotion!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    all poems have a flow, but either it's good or it's not...and this one is right in the's not horribly bad, but it's not absolutely perfect either...but nice idea, good word choice! keep it up!