Comments : Angel, I should've told you...

  • 12 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    OMG WOW!!!!!!! Okay, tears on my cheeks :*(**** lol....wow, this is just...well, for one, it's absolutely brillliiaaannntttttt....secondly...it's so SAD omg....*sorry* lol. Wow. You're a freaking awessommeee writer hun. *makes room for you on my favorites* =D I love you. Lovely work...completely stunned...Great job...I hope it never happens to anyone either..such a sin =( there were like 3 verses that really, really hit me...I think this one the most cos I can relate..:

    ""What's wrong", you're always asked
    You return with the same reply
    "Nothing, I'm okay..." said with
    a disheartened twinkle in your eye"

    Awesome...you're really talented! <3 I can't wait to read more =) xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachael

    That was really sweet....everyone should have a friend like you...you gave some very good advice...excellent job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WHOA! Excellent write. I loved every single bit of it. Truly an amazing piece. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Nice poem! It flowed very nicely!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    rolo, this was absolutely written so beautiful. A pleasure to read. Loved the flow and the wording.....superb. hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hey this poem is really good. Good Job.

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    beautiful job! you're an amazing writer

  • 12 years ago

    by MoNoMaNiA

    your poem has a soul. keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    So true Rolo, life is a gift that can be taken from us at any given time, its so important to tell our loved ones how we feel about them, what they mean to us and how they have impacted on our lives. Great write I really enjoyed it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Feathered Ice

    If only I told you everything that I felt,
    And if only you knew of all my love
    Then maybe you'd be my angel on Earth
    Instead of an angel flying up above

    Boy do i know how that feels... RIP Erin.

    This poem meant alot to me and i just want to say thankyou.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kymberly

    That poem is so awsome...Keep it up , your good =D

  • 12 years ago

    by miracle

    It's so beautifull.. I get tears in my eyes
    I regconise a friend of mine in it
    very good!

  • 12 years ago

    by XHiddenAgendasX

    awesome...that was a really good poem...Keep up the good work...

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Awesome !!!!!!!is all I can say I'm speachless 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ***ThE^uSeD^aNd^AbUsEd***

    That is such an amazing poem with such a heartfelt meaning*** I read this poem and it showed me to tell my best friend how im feeling, as shes going through a rough tym @ the mo, so thankz!!!!
    Love Naya
    xxoo

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    That is worded so well and so beautiful and meaningful...
    I believe you should tell your friends (and other loved ones) how much they mean to you, too...before it's too late...what a wonderful message, I would be proud of it too...very proud... and I just love the idea of Earth angels...they are all around, but sometimes no one notices really...or just don't say anything...

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    Wow this is great, it has a really good message. I love your style.

  • 11 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    This is a great poem with an invaluable meaning. Another great job. Well Done

    Andrew Kirkman
    xXx

  • 11 years ago

    by JLT

    Awwww, Britt! It's beautiful. It's so sad. :( It brought tears to my eyes. It also made me realize that i should tell my friends how much they mean to me more often... This is an amazing poem and it was written by the most awesomest Britt in the world! :) I love you. Keep writing or i'll beat you up! Hehe *huggles*

    ~Jessica

  • 11 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    OMG, Rolo!!!!!! I'm so glad that you recommended that I read this! you are an amazing poet! I really, really loved it! The flow was perfect and the rhymes were excellent!!!!! I'm adding you to my favorites!!!!! Great job!!!!

    Love always,
    ~BJ~