Comments : Daddys little girl

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    :) thanks.

  • 12 years ago

    by Char

    Hey Ashley... You are amazing! Your poetry makes my work look like crap! You are so talented, so keep writing! I love your work, and I can't wait to read more from you! I'm so sorry that your dad left you with a heart full of pain. That's not right. But just remember that he is missing out on watching his wonderful daughter grow up and go places. That's his loss... Not yours... I know it seems stupid, and that it doesn't matter whether it was his choice or not, because you wish you could have a dad that would be there for ya... But its the truth... We cannot control everyone's actions... But stay strong...

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    thank you so much :) i'm begining to feel a little better today.

  • 12 years ago

    by abcede

    Ashley, that is so sad!! but is extremely well written!!! great job! i love your style and real-life themes!! awesome!

    maybe you could check out some of mine!?

  • 12 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    oh wow, that was great. just excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    That's soo sad.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I did'nt have a dad growing up. But this touched me all the same.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well done, seemed awkward in a few places but nothing detracting at all. I like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by greenmunky

    awww that was cute well luv ya byebye

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    oh, this is so good. I'm going to put
    you in my favorites right now. you
    write beautifully. keep it up.
    take care, Marjan

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    OMG that's so sad. I am so sorry! I feel for you because I was a daddys girl. I didn't have a good relationship with my mom though! We still have our problems from time to time! You're an amazing writer I noticed your age. You have such potential! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Princess09

    it was ok stick to one format its easier to read tht way

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    excellent poem hun...I can really relate to this poem alot...I really wish i can be closer with my dad sometimes but I know it would never happen. good job. take care xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by & i still ♥ him

    i really like this poem, keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by kayla

    i'm my Daddys little girl to.

  • 12 years ago

    by kayla

    oh wow, that was great. just excellent

    my beother did'nt have a dad growing up. But this touched me all the same.

    great poem i must say. keep it up. very touching

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW WOW WOW!! You have no idea how badly I hate hearing that people feel this way..It really makes me sick..I mean I am so sorry..No girl..or boy at that matter..should have to feel that pain...I am so sorry I just wish I could take it away somehow..hey..would sharing my dad help? haha just kidding...but you hang in there and sooner or later you'll find you made it without him because you are strong! Wonderful write!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! This is really good! It flowed great. I'm gonna add you to my favorties! You got a lot of talent!
    Love always,
    haily
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    wow i like this one too the rhym scheme ws great.....wonderful job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    i like the emotion put into this poem, nice job, keep it up :)