Bread Fascination

by †JustAri†   Jun 29, 2005


Lovely dough.......
Your value unknown
Of the offspring you birth
That rise from your ashes

The special loave
In the plastic bag
Is light in it's hope
Heavy with the doubt that it will survive

For every morning and noon
When a hungry hand charges into the secure world
And abducts not one, but two
That were peacefully sleeping soundly alongside each other
But are now rudely awakened by this nightmare

The rest are aroused by the muffled cries
And they all observe in horror of what is taking place..........

WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!

*This one was for you Sunny lol....

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Lol i read that post..nice poem...esp. since its about bread...can u mayb chek out my stuff?
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    really* haha... 5/5 anyways..

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    wow.. that is really good.. your read smart... such big words..

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    this is really clever, i like it, it almost reminds me of my "coffe kryptonite" poem, haha, great work. thanx for commenting on mine. bye bye
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like this. great flow and style. amazing job!

    5.5

    love & hugs