holy crap... that is... so good. its so sad. but open and true. its .... wow.

:sigh: I wish I could make EVERYTHING better...
Car

me too ^

An incredible job with the poem...really....outstanding.
I admire your poetic skills.

And you're so damn sweet! Thank you for the comments. Means a great deal to me. *smile of appreciation*

undying blusher

xoxox

Woah!!! Zac, that's amazing!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously!!!! Like a classic poem, and the vocabulary amazed me too, lol!! And I'm surprised that even in a sad poem, you even added romance. You're quite the romantist, aren't you? lol!! But, wow..the poem...., I'm jealous of this poem, seriously. I wish I had written it, but I know you deserve it! You're such a remarkable poet!!! Please hang in there, love!

~Sierra

______Meatball Hoagie#2_____

hey, great poem, i must say it was written to perfection. awesome job.

- tan

awsome job keep all the work up
Love, JessI

o zac thats so sad. good poem though. i hope your ok. stay strong and keep writing. miss you bunches. much love
Chelsea

This is an awesome poem... but my computer says I already voted, but just to let you know you got a 5 from me. lol
Asian Luv Alwayz

this is great!!!!your writing is really good...sad but hella good!!!5/5

omg...that was soooo good. i think that it is one of my favorites. great job!

good poem... miss ya tons. i really am worried and would love to hear from you. just let me sleep a little tonight. anywho... ttyl
-cort

totally amazing poem! really well written, so sad, but i loved it! 5/5 seriously great write,

thanks for your comment on my poem, ment alot. cheers

kt x

Wow dude, that is some great writing.. I really enjoyed reading it.. great work.. 6.43 on my 6.66 scale

That was AMAZING 5/5 i really dont know what else to say.......
Much Luv, Manda

Brilliant, i loved it from start to finish! Welldone!!

wow..awesome..wow..

holy crap! great poem!! greatly written and soooo original! good job! 5/5

that was the best poem i have ever heared in my life awsome job and keep up the good work.

nicely done, you're good at this : )
read some of my stuff if you get bored...
Luv Niki

Beautiful poem,.. Every stanza flowed so well and I loved the rhyme scheme. You are so talented and such a cutie cuz all your poems manage to do with someone you love.
take care:)
be talking to you soon:D