Comments : These Headlights

  • 13 years ago

    by eternal rest

    holy crap... that is... so good. its so sad. but open and true. its .... wow.

  • 13 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    :sigh: I wish I could make EVERYTHING better...
    Car

  • 13 years ago

    by undying blusher

    me too ^

    An incredible job with the poem...really....outstanding.
    I admire your poetic skills.

    And you're so damn sweet! Thank you for the comments. Means a great deal to me. *smile of appreciation*

    undying blusher

    xoxox

  • 13 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Woah!!! Zac, that's amazing!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously!!!! Like a classic poem, and the vocabulary amazed me too, lol!! And I'm surprised that even in a sad poem, you even added romance. You're quite the romantist, aren't you? lol!! But, wow..the poem...., I'm jealous of this poem, seriously. I wish I had written it, but I know you deserve it! You're such a remarkable poet!!! Please hang in there, love!

    ~Sierra

    ______Meatball Hoagie#2_____

  • 13 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    hey, great poem, i must say it was written to perfection. awesome job.

    - tan

  • 13 years ago

    by Sing me another sad song

    awsome job keep all the work up
    Love, JessI

  • 13 years ago

    by none

    o zac thats so sad. good poem though. i hope your ok. stay strong and keep writing. miss you bunches. much love
    Chelsea

  • 13 years ago

    by Thao Anh

    This is an awesome poem... but my computer says I already voted, but just to let you know you got a 5 from me. lol
    Asian Luv Alwayz

  • 13 years ago

    by sara

    this is great!!!!your writing is really good...sad but hella good!!!5/5

  • omg...that was soooo good. i think that it is one of my favorites. great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by courtney

    good poem... miss ya tons. i really am worried and would love to hear from you. just let me sleep a little tonight. anywho... ttyl
    -cort

  • 13 years ago

    by XKt_ShellyX

    totally amazing poem! really well written, so sad, but i loved it! 5/5 seriously great write,

    thanks for your comment on my poem, ment alot. cheers

    kt x

  • 13 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    Wow dude, that is some great writing.. I really enjoyed reading it.. great work.. 6.43 on my 6.66 scale

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda

    That was AMAZING 5/5 i really dont know what else to say.......
    Much Luv, Manda

  • 13 years ago

    by Nicole Korwin

    Brilliant, i loved it from start to finish! Welldone!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Summer

    wow..awesome..wow..

  • 13 years ago

    by abcede

    holy crap! great poem!! greatly written and soooo original! good job! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by jessica

    that was the best poem i have ever heared in my life awsome job and keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Absinth Eyes

    nicely done, you're good at this : )
    read some of my stuff if you get bored...
    Luv Niki

  • 13 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Beautiful poem,.. Every stanza flowed so well and I loved the rhyme scheme. You are so talented and such a cutie cuz all your poems manage to do with someone you love.
    take care:)
    be talking to you soon:D