Dont leave me

by Amanda   Jul 21, 2005

A thousand tears pass my eyes as I’m lying on the bed,
I want to be somewhere else, to sort out my head,
I couldn’t stop the words flow out, anything I said,
Said some pretty crazy things like wishing to be dead,

I said I didn’t want you, or to be your friend,
But I never meant to say it, I’m with you til the end,
I’m sorry and I love you, my heart is broke in two,
Because of what you said, you were angry too,

I am living in your house, a million miles from home,
I wanted to feel safe and loved, not feel all alone,
I’m sure we’ll soon work this whole thing out,
Hope we don’t have to scream and shout,

I’ve been here four weeks and we’re closer than before,
Can’t believe we nearly closed that special door,
The best friendships are forever, won’t give it the chop,
If I ever lose you then let my heart just stop.

Copy right – Amanda Linzi 2005

It's not that good but me and Jade have alot to sort out. please comment though. we're strong friends so we should work it out.
Afterall i love her.


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  • 12 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats gorgeous, i like the tense its set it and the message

  • 12 years ago

    by cac123

    This was so beautiful and heartfelt i reaally enjoyed this and i can relate it to all of my fights with friends.. it really is amazing you are a really good writer.

    p.s i really really appreciate your comments you left me thank you so much it means a lot to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! 5/5! your also very talented and I plan to read more of your poetry when I have the time but until then keep it up! Much luv xox Britney xox

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is such a heartfelt write so sad and blue. I hope things did work out for you.

    Warm regards,


  • 12 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    thats really good!