At Last I'm Free

by erely   Aug 13, 2005


At last I'm free and I can see
All it took was me to be me
Out from under emotions untrue
A curse lifted from me being blue

Years I've wasted on wondering what if
My God I thank you for this great gift
Being Honest and being strong
Man this lesson just took to long

So if your emotions lead you somewhere
And your not really sure if that someone cares
Walk right up and have your say
One way or another you'll know that day

Why wallow in what if or maybe
Speak right up and keep yourself free
Don't give away your heart on a feeling
Speak your mind and you'll know what is dealing

Written by L.G.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I don't know what drew me to your poems, but this was the first thing I read.My god, I so needed to read this, to hear this(read my last piece'The Last Good-bye and also 'All That Matters At This Moment' and 'Where are You?' and you'll understand why).This is beautifully written, what you expressed made me sad, but somewhat comforted, and realizing how true your insight is, and though it's going to take time, reading this made me feel a bit better.Thank you.Truly , thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    Great poem well done, thank you very much for your comments on poems they were greatly appreciated, take care,

    *~Jen~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Loved it.
    i'm wasting years asking myself "why if"
    i love your poems i feel very identified with them

    adios, take care

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Bravo, bravo, well done!!! A strong voice and poem, as well!!!