The first cut is the deepest

by jac   Aug 20, 2005


We found her lying on the floor
with a slight grin upon her face
her hand was halfway out the door
the blood was all over the linen and lace

the gashes in her wrists are deep
her blood ran out so slowly
she didn't die in her sleep
her heart was always lonely

no one knows what caused her this much pain
we didn't get to say goodbye
from this, no one has anything to gain
all we can do is just sit and cry

she was a stereotypical angel
everything minus the wings
with bright blonde hair and light blue eyes
no one could've ruined her dreams

all the girls had wanted
to be her best friend
all the boys wanted her
and to be with her until the end

but something must've triggered her
and led to this dreadful and dreary solution
no one has anything about this to say
only why did she choose this as a resolution?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah

    Hannah loves this poem true true

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Jac ..
    That was truly one of the most heartwrenching poems I've yet to read ...
    It makes me (the reader ) wonder what made her so sad to end it all ..

    Beautiful piece that kept my interest till the very end ....
    Hope to read more soon ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay

    WOW....... I really love this poem. it hits so close to home for me.. keep up the great great great work

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    I read all your poem and this is the one i like the best. It's sad but i like your choice of words specially the last line. Anyway keep writing good poems. Thanks you too for leaving a comment on my work "Mirror". See you around!

  • 18 years ago

    by F U

    Great poem....i can tell it had lots of meaning to it...thanx for ur comments on my poem...very much appreciated =) keep it up

    rach
    x

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