Comments : Don't give up

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    First time ever, that a poem has made me cry so much as this one did....The best poem I have ever read, honestly!!!! Something every one out there can relate to and me too.....I often want to end my life, almost every day and you know I have tried a few times, but yesterday I REALLY thought about death and stuff like that and it made me cry, cause I realized that I'm so scared.....I try to end something I only get once in a life time!!! And you are so right, it takes a strong person to live, giving up is too easy and though I know that, I sometimes feels so weak, that giving up is the only way out!!!! It's like every time I feel fine, I once again get depressed....Do you know what I mean???
    Well as you can see your poem really made me think and it made me get some things out to ease my heart!!! Thanks for making this poem and for sharing it with all of us, it's brilliant....

    *Much love Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    WOOOOW! That was F|U|C|K|I|N|G brilliant! Loved it, well done x x

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    I got all teary eyed *sniff sniff*....that was an amazing poem, you are a brilliant writer! keep up the amazing work....i love this poem so much....take care *hugs*

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 12 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Wow..i needed to hear that..thnx ur awesum!

    i luv this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Amazing poem... loved the positive additute

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 12 years ago

    by mistake

    Well done, anotheer exalent poem i thought it was great and i'm sure from the comments other people did to. you've made another great one i'm sure many people can and will relate to. well done amy keep it up xoxoxox.

  • 12 years ago

    by Virginia

    VERY well done. You're very talented. Nice message being conveyed. I hope everyone gets a chance to read this.

    Very nice. 5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Great job!! You have talent..and courage to let people come to you w/their problems!! I respect that!! Keep writing!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Silouette Dreams

    Thanks but it's really hard to stay strong when the only people that are your friends, the only ones that undrstand are the ones that you don't even know (you know like I know you people but not in person) And the people that surround me are the ones that are telling em to die... And when you get told to die eventually your brain trys to make up a reason for why they say that... And I'm sorry to say my reason is because i don't deserve to live... I suck!!!!! Yah, that's pretty much it. Please don't take this in offence. I love your poem it's just... there's more issues 4 me.

  • 12 years ago

    by erely

    That was a very inspirational poem,,, with lots of insight....great writing

  • 12 years ago

    by chicaaf

    Amazing job
    I just don't know what to say
    it gives me a good feeling
    thanks !

  • 12 years ago

    by stlzhunii420

    I really like your poem it trully means lot

  • 12 years ago

    by XTaintedxBeautyX

    Hey this is the first actual poem that makes me think of how many ppl actually are out there that would care... your amazing at writing poems and keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Eric McGlaughlin

    I love this poem!! It sounds a lot like me, I always try to help people up when they're down. Just remember angel, There's more than one of you! Don't try to take it upon yourself to help everyone, save some for me! When you need to talk to someone, I'm here!

  • 12 years ago

    by BabyAngelstar116

    This is a really good poem. It made me cry and your right! I've felt like that I suometimes still do.

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Omg that poem was so great it made me cry. it really touched my heart. u r a very good writer. im gonna copy that down and read it everytime i have one of those moments where i find my self in the bathroom about to make a mistake. it was really thoughtfull of u to write a poem for everyone.

  • Beautiful poem.

    I completely understand how and why you wrote this poem.

    We can all get so down with life at times, i know i can, but the most important thing is to keep moving forward.

    Giving in to death, is the easy way out, and is an utterly selfish thing to do. Killing your pain, but putting it on to the ones you love is simply a selfish act, no matter the reasons.

    Amazing and inspiring poem filled with so much emotion.


  • 12 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! Wow, I loved this poem! I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem! Good job! Hey, if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote cuz it would mean the world to me! Aweosme poem though . . . 5/5 for sure . . . keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    Great poem. thanks for being the kind of person who thinks of dont get that alot..

  • 12 years ago

    by nobody

    I love it. it made me cry soooooo much. i like the bit at the end. it made me feel loved