Can you feel the love people?
In your face when you smile?
Or when the sun shines on you?
Climb a tree holding hands
Do you feel your mind expand?
When you fly above the world?
Or when you dream at night?
We'll always sing a song together
And devote our lives to eachother
We'll be together on this day
To proudly stand around and play
Or will you feel and see the hurt?
When all the mud turns to dirt?
And when the sun starts to set?
Live your life in natures arms
To be protected from all harm
Cause i can see the proud in you
When your happiness starts to build
Or when your dreams are fulfilled
But can you feel the life in you?
When your death is over due?
And when the world walks away?
Amazing job. i really liked this one also. Like alot. To me this one was like it's okay to smile it's great to be happy and don't worry your not alone. Then others in this poem is like the over due death was like you haven't commit your crime maybe life is holding you inside and your not ready and don't want to because you have so much things to do here. Also your dreams are wonderful to give up your life. To me that's what i thought and there's so much more but i wanna read more of your poems because your very talented. and i really love your work. You did an amazing job once again keep it up. keep on writing .love always and forever.