From the lover to the loved

by Bradley Peter   Sep 17, 2005


Every morning i wake
your the first on my mind
I'd swim under a frozen lake
if it was you that I'd find

you mean more that you'll ever know
it's much more than love
your and angel in the snow
and the whitest of a dove

when your not near
i can hardly breathe
and i am filled with the fear
that soon you will leave

I'm more in love than ever
than i ever have been before
but it all depends on whether
you'll let me love you more

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  • 8 years ago

    by Jessica

    I thought this was very sweet and cute. not my favorite of yours, but great nonetheless.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww is this the one about the last poem. If so i see you found some words to say this time lol. Awesome job
    -vino

  • 11 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Lol... i think kirsty's got something for you... i do too! ;D cute poem! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Tiffany Danielle Allen

    Great poem keep it up... i would like for you to rwad some of mine plz comment and vote on them thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by MissSideways

    I LOOOVE this poem. good stuff babe, im putting this on my wall lol. keep it up!! xoxo luv dani