by TinyDancer46 Oct 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Age of six |
by Jack
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VERY GOOD!!! |
by CRAFTY KEN
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Well written Tiny Dancer 46! If your motive was to make me broken hearted, it worked. It was a long tale that followed two lovers from their childhood, with all the bumps in the road, and death ending it all except the many melancholy memories. Well rhymed. |
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aww.. my tears is about to roll down.. beautifully sad. |
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beautiful poem |
by mossgirl19
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Oh my...I can see why it is the most favored poem here. A really heart-breaking story beautifully told. |