What Everyone Else Thinks

by Carmen   Oct 14, 2005


My confidence has risen,
I have begun to shine.
All the girls think I'm pretty,
And the guys think I'm fine.
I should be happy,
This I know,
But what I want is you to notice me,
Now that I glow.

I smile and blush,
As they compliment on what they see,
But the only opinion I care of,
Is of the man that's not looking at me.

Can't you see,
Who I'm doing this for?
I know we silently like each other,
But baby, I want more.

Now what you think,
Is a thought I'm willing to dare.
What everyone else thinks,
I really don't care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Aww, this was adorable.
    Your flow was flawless.
    & your emotion was strong but not overpowering.
    Great job!
    5/5

    XxAmberxX

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    It's true that it all comes down to what just one person thinks in the end
    Very well written poem, and full of a lot of truth
    The last line was particularily good...dare makes it sound like a risk....like love is

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww this is a really cute poem. I can somewhat relate to it. but you did a great job on it. It flowed very nicely and wasn't all chopped up. & the meaning was good. 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Ok, well the thought is there, but I don't think you really fill it to its fullest. Fill out your next poems and you could have something in your style. Good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, very well written peice of poetry. Good Job! Keep up the amazing work.

    ~Joe~

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