Oh my gosh, Amazing poem, I loved every line, It was creative, and unique, I loved how you put it in your own perspecitive and not like every other poem, It was truely one of the best poems I've read in a long time, amazing job, 5/5
Simply exquisite. Even now I hold my fingers to my lips, and I cry. My stomach is taught and I feel as if Iâ€™m dying inside. In ways I understand, in ways I can only guess and attempt to comprehend, but none the less, its painfully beautiful.