Ok. i disagree with trixie. sorry, but i do.
you have this way of making me forget everything around me and just envisage your poem.
i was sitting there reading it, thinking of one of those little girls in horror movies, who sing nursery rhymes to theirselves to lighten their moods when theres a killer around the corner. so much pain, so young.
your poem was really good, and i'm not the kind of person who'd just say it to anyone. the rhymes flowed like the blood you seem to write so much about...crap analog, but you catch my drift. this is a good idea, i'm really glad you shared it with us, and got over your writer's block.
In an odd sort of sick way, I liked that poem/song thing being a cutter myself. I like reading your poems in general because they are honest and talk about the life you have had to live, a life that no one shoule have to, but one you keep trying to live, and for that I am very proud of you. You are amazing, please do not give up!