A love like cancer

by PoeticJustice   Feb 11, 2006


I want you to know that its a little fcked up that im stuck here waiting, at times
debating cant figure out, whats right or wrong, so i sit here with nothing, and
write you a poem im to0 confused, to make up my mind, i look for a way out but its
you who i find. i dont know who you are, and i cant figure you out. my minds lost in
translation and my heart wants to shout so i give you a call, with nothing to say,
theres dead silence in the air, with nothin to say i wish it was like,the way it
used to be, when we were happy together, and you said you loved me but,now things
are different, you know how it is, i try my hardest all the time, to forget about
this,., to, keep you off my mind, to keep myself smiling, but in return, i always
seem to always find you crying i ask you wats wrong, though i do know the answer,
this love is a sickness, something just like cancer.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Wow! This was amazing. Very emotional. It gave me chille.s 5/5 for sure.
    And in response to your comment on my poem "A struggle to accept myself"
    uh yeah, it was me talking to myself. I must sound a little crazy in it. Haha. But thanks for the comment!
    Anyways, keep writing. I loved this.

  • 10 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    This one has strong meanings and lots of emotion! i can totally relate to this!!! great job!!!!!!!! =o]

  • 10 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY like this poe. Can't explain exactly why, it just gave me a cool feeling inside.

    Great work!!! 5/5

    Josie

  • 10 years ago

    by GoRgEoUs TONI

    Awww this is great!!awwww
    i love it!!
    this is terrific!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is awesome! Keep writing! It's really sweet! Great job!!!

    *Sylvia*