An unspoken story

by Hurtingsoul   Apr 28, 2006


The sword shines in the sun
Time to start the merciful fun
A blood drop shatters on the floor
Screams are heard pleading no more

Impression of an angered face
Killing thousands leaving no trace
Horror among the land beyond the sea
Where fences cross leaving no one free

The grace of a warrior running by
As the hero awakens to attend the cry
Salvation will come salvation will go
But tainted pain shall last no more

Heartaches searching for their cure
When its love that makes the heart pure
Love that surpasses life and death
Lives long and short as a taken breath

Tears shed by the people who mourn
For the loves lost in the terrible war
As their divine souls slowly dies inside
And pain overtakes a blissful mind

Let the unspoken words tell the story
Of all lost in the fray and their glory?

i read a tale of a war sorta got me inpired..please vote and comment

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    Ooooo, nice nice! Wonderfully done, but I don't feel the feeling of war....(sorry!) 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Beautiful poem....there are no words to descibe how awesome this poem is...great work ....give it a 10! LOVE IT !!!!!!!! keep up the good work !!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was brilliant! I loved the language, it described war perfectly. I felt as if I was captured inside your poem and was seeing everything through my own eyes. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I liked this one a lot - 5/5! =) pls r/r/c one of my newest one thx!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd luv ya chica